Saturday August 12
i asked for, in a way, a critique. And got the perfect one that is a key to my understanding what i do. if i let mySelf feel free enough to do that. the critique was: they seem more like bases, beginnings. The story is unclear.
they are simply collages of scrap that uhhhhh, to me, depict Wonder. That Meter of Desire….what registered most strongly (it was like the moment in the scene of 5 notes, Close Encounters of a Third Kind) was Wonder. i realized that what i am really really good at, is Wondering. Wondering about Wonder. and i think…..well, no wonder the story is unclear. and in the moment, it all feels just very OK. We'll see if it "holds".

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